Will CC for Honey Nut Cheerios

Going to try and bang out a couple of reviews today if the inhabitants of this workplace deem it allowable. Meantime, here is a little something something I scribbled:

Bird of Paradise

Full of missing you
devours me completely
Swallowing me up, my regret
that I cannot be with you.
It makes me listen
to a slower song
So that maybe I can still
imagine I am still embracing you.